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My heart is breaking as the second’s pas,
Time now drifting by so fast.
I miss you but your not hear,
As down my cheek falls tear after tear.
No one to tern to nothing I to say,
As I sit hear day after day.
Now I need you your no were to be fawned,
And yet I just keep looking arrowed.
I used to think you be here forever,
But now I know my ties have been severed.
A million things I want to say,
But now for me there is no way.
The brig has crumbled form beneath my feet,
Now I’m falling in to the dark of the deep.
I need you to cache me as I fall but slowly lives my soul.
With no one to tern to and no were to go,
I now throw my self out my window.
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resontly a verry good friend of mine who helped me though all the shit in my lift and whent back home to silly and will not be reterning and with out him things have been relly hard for me so this is about how i feal now hes gon and how i miss him.
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awesome line at the end...but dont really do it. cus if you did....id have to come to your house, and steal all your works and copywrite them as my own... hahahahah
but seriously...me n u would get along very well...lots of the same shit in our lives...according to your poetry. I think thats why i like it so much, because i can relate...and your a good poet. aside the minor mispellings.
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~juggalette57 Jul 25, 2004   Traditional Artist
lol your probbibly right there about us being so similer:D
im glad you liked it! but im not going to throw myself out the windo makes to much of a mess:D thanks for the coment much apreeshated:hug: MCL
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